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You
By: addie slebodnik
You are the beginning
Like the first drop of rain
Before a spring shower
Your eyes are fireflies
Lost in the pitch of night
Between Dusk and Dawn
A melodious chant
Floats through the air
Suspended by invisible thread
And as clinging snow
On the birth of spring
You remain to be the end.
By: addie slebodnik
You are the beginning
Like the first drop of rain
Before a spring shower
Your eyes are fireflies
Lost in the pitch of night
Between Dusk and Dawn
A melodious chant
Floats through the air
Suspended by invisible thread
And as clinging snow
On the birth of spring
You remain to be the end.
I wanted to keep this poem simple, like a simple romance. The first three lines are relating their love to spring, lines 4-6 are summer, 7-9 autumn, and winter as the last three. I got the inspiration from a series of songs we're singing in kantorians so what little emotional attachment i have to this, feel free to rip it open with critque.
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nicely done. 